ManasRaphael

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AwkwardChingon

@xlllllllllx usually I update this story every weekend with one or two chapters and if would sometimes ads a chapter if im not too busy in the weekdays too so there will be one either today or tomorrow
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ManasRaphael

@AwkwardChingon is there gonna be an update on return of the uzumaki clan? 
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CoffeeAficionado1

Apologies again for the chapter here, apparently I write too long of notes.
          Figured would be easier to send here instead of possible spoilers in your works. Loving it so far, keep it up. If you want me to stop giving suggestions I will, else wise another easy solution for Sakura is to transfer her fangirl behavior to Naruto, she doesn't really know how to express herself properly outside of this behavior. The whole awkward teenager phase. Then when Tsunade is brought into the village, Sakura can become her apprentice. Included in the training is how to express her feelings for the knucklehead. By doing it this way, it can also bring Tsunade into Narutos orbit. Tsunade feels attracted to him due to his bright/warm/loving personality however due to her age she feels dejected. This is where my suggestion regarding regressing her age comes into play.

CoffeeAficionado1

@AwkwardChingon By going this route it will open the door for others as well. Granted part of the age regression through chakra has been used on other FFs, if it ain’t broke don’t fix it.
            
            Heck I’ve even toying around myself trying to write a story where Narutos chakra begins to infect his lovers in another way. Depends on your view of yuri stories, but after the ladies marry him and have had enough exposure to his chakra, they can actually impregnate each other and the bloodlines involved become shared. For example Mikoto and Tsume are knocking boots, Tsume becomes pregnant from it however when the kid is born they have Pakuras Scorch release and Mei’s Lava release. Basically any one of them can have a kid with any one else’s abilities.
            
            As for rebuilding Uzu, that does bring another lass to mind and could lead to funny family situations. Sara from the time travel desert clan around Roran. She ends up having a daughter with him in the past (Seramu) and then when it gets to the present we have a father with a daughter older then him. They move their tribe to the new land I mentioned earlier (Snow, Demon, Whirlpools, Birds) and she is it’s first princess.
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CoffeeAficionado1

@AwkwardChingon As for Tsunade, she is heartbroken. She pushes Sakura to confess to Naruto so she can live vicariously through Sakura dreaming of what could have been. When Naruto confronts Tsunade why she seems distant, it finally breaks the damn so to speak and Tsunade is sobbing about everything. Naruto decides to show her love by forcibly removing her henge. This makes Tsunade even more depressed. However right afterwards Naruto pins her and passionately kisses her throwing all his love at her through the kiss, unbeknownst to them his chakra is forced into Tsunade through the kiss. Naruto begins to rant and rave at how awesome she is, not to get down on herself, thus building her up again. While talking neither is paying attention to Tsunades body that has been de-aged. Naruto gets grumpy when he notices it saying why did she redo her henge only for them to realize she didn’t. At this point Tsunade throws herself at him and confesses as she realizes what happened.
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CoffeeAficionado1

@AwkwardChingon Personally I would go the actual chakra infusion route. Seal route would lead to others trying to get him to show them how or something. Similar to how he described the need for love in the relationship for them to have kids, anyone if mutually loved by an Uzumaki with enough chakra can have their age regressed. Even better, once he learns Sage mode (Please go this new route I’ve been seeing where instead of the toads he finds out the Uzumakis had access to either a clan of foxes or mythical birds for summons) and he is intimate with one of his wives, it leaves a sage seed in them where they start learning sage mode easier. The summons are based on elements, i.e. mythical birds could be like the bird Pokémon Zapdos, Moltres(Phoenix) or Articuno where the foxes just have an element based on their own power (Good joke to explain FireFox). This then gives the wives access to all elements so depending on the wife involved whatever is their strongest element is what color they exude in sage mode. Example again would be Hinata. One FF I’ve read recently on why she has difficulty with her clan Gentle Fist is due to her elemental nature. She has a higher affinity to water where the Gentle Fist requires Earth. As such, her sage mode would be more blues and flowing.
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