Awkwardlyexisting7

It took me 4 times to upload him lol
          	
          	It kept deleting it 

Awkwardlyexisting7

Any advice on how to improve my books
          
          I want to work on a new one and I'd like to take it seriously 

AprilJester

An app called Grammerly. You can use the free version.  I have the paid version but the free one works great!
            
            Readers are turned off if they have to struggle to read your work. Your storylines are wonderful and this may be what you need to keep readers. 
            
            Also, plan the characters, basically how the story will end. This will help you as you write each chapter. 
            
            For instance: Denise is kind of dizzy but well-meaning. She will be paired with Scott. Devin is the bad guy. He goes to jail at the end.
            
            Keep writing!
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Awkwardlyexisting7

Please if you dislike my books so much there is no need to be rude please just simply stop reading it if you hate it that much 

AprilJester

Victoria, just write.  Forget about validation.  Just write.  
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AprilJester

@Awkwardlyexisting7 ...OMG!!!  DON'T LISTEN TO THEM!  
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Awkwardlyexisting7

Any book recommendations 

AprilJester

I finally finished my first book.  Take a look and give me your thoughts.
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AprilJester

@Awkwardlyexisting7 Love and abuse in a mxm, One Omega and One Pup are amazing.  If not your cup of tea, try A Comforters Tale and Wanting To Belong.  They have no sex scenes but will get you in the feels!
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