Axolotllove3rs

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Sigh...
          	
          	Bye bye Monster World.
          	
          	I fucking hate it. The plot is shit before I'm even 5 chapters in.
          	
          	It wad the epics fighting the commons, but plotholes kept fucking me up
          	
          	MIMIC ISNT EVEN ON AMBER ISLAND
          	
          	BEMEEBETH CANNOT ESCAPE THE WORKSHOP AS HE WILL FALL APART
          	
          	I did do Gnarl correctly.
          	
          	EVERYTHING IS ASS

Axolotllove3rs

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Sigh...
          
          Bye bye Monster World.
          
          I fucking hate it. The plot is shit before I'm even 5 chapters in.
          
          It wad the epics fighting the commons, but plotholes kept fucking me up
          
          MIMIC ISNT EVEN ON AMBER ISLAND
          
          BEMEEBETH CANNOT ESCAPE THE WORKSHOP AS HE WILL FALL APART
          
          I did do Gnarl correctly.
          
          EVERYTHING IS ASS

Axolotllove3rs

HAPPY PRIDE MONTH! As for the month, I shall reveal the characters sexuality's 
          
          
          Axo: Pansexual, Genderfluid and Poly
          Axid: Bisexual and Poly
          Slimara: Lesbian (as in non male liking non male) and Poly
          Draco: Aroace (hetero)
          Gabriella: Pansexual with a preference for women
          Lorys: Gay
          Flurr: Lesbian/bi (Its up to Fl00fyFoxx to decide.)
          Nolan: Aroace. Not because he doesn't like romance, but because he doesn't even know what it is.
          Mia: Straight
          Leah: Lesbian
          Blaze: I'm just gonna guess straight.
          Lumen: bisexual with a preference for men.
          Lumi: gay
          Apex: Homophobic (with a hint of genderfluid but thats our fault)
          The sins: Pansexual
          The virtues: Straight
          Alex: Bisexual
          Null: pansexual
          T: Aromantic and Non-binary
          E: Pansexual and Aroace (pick a side)
          L: Bisexual and Aromantic
          O: Bisexual

Axolotllove3rs

Here's one fun fact for every OC:
          
          Axo's personality is actually based off Ralsei Deltarune, but their design is slightly based off Angel Dust (mainly for being thin as a twig)
          
          Axis is the only character to not be white. "What about Flurr?"... ehhh I'm gonna say her fact later
          
          Slimara was the only character to have an Island and Kingdom named after her. I said was because the Island was scrapped which will be a fact on its own.
          
          Draco went through not only a personality change, a Design change, but also a full on name change. "Huh?". Originally, Draco was called Drago, who was then scrapped and then re-used as the second member for the Song Of Truth.
          
          Gabriella, despite being a part of the Lust and Deceit family, shows no traits of Osmodeus. She took the form of Doloron.
          
          Lorys' design was entirely based on the owl from 99 nights in the forest. And previously a Wendigo.
          
          Flurr is actually not a human reincarnate, but an animal. This is rare as barely any animals get brought here.
          
          N.O.L.A.N had a name change midway though the book. Going from Nolan, to N.O.L.A.N. 
          
          Mia's original name was Charlie, which is not close to the other names that were scrapped. (Lorus, Gabriel, NOLQN, Drago)
          
          Leah just... barely has any relevance. She doesn't truly pain Axid, despite killing her mother and almost her father.
          
          Blaze was the original name for the god of fire, which stood alongside Luna, Corel and Poppy. Those were scrapped.
          
          Lumen's design is based off of Petaly, a fan-made deltarune boss.
          
          Lumi was the newest addition to the cast, replacing Silver, which, in an old version, was a shadow being that destroyed the light and trapped the four Guardians.
          
          Apex does not have a official design. This is to avoid having to struggle making a design that fits the name.
          
          

Axolotllove3rs

So for changes in LBJMWHIH, I shall:
          
          Remove the picnicking part and replace it.
          
          Axo shall have normal speech this time.
          
          I will emphasize that the Angel's name IS Micheal.
          
          For TTAHD:
          
          I will make the other dragon's appear and fight alongside Axo, Axid, Slimara and Draco.
          
          I will include scrapped forms of the heroes. Those being Titan forms.
          
          For TIOM:
          
          Add scrapped version of the Guardians of time (who will replace the Faker TELO)
          
          Completely rework the four parts (Gabriella, Lorys, Flurr and Nolan)
          

Fl00fyFoxx

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@Axolotllove3rs YEEEEEEEEE- IM SO FUCKING EXCITED HOLY FUCK
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MANEKOs

Eyyyy bro is it ok if I post my entry a bit too late, I have a lot 9f exams right now ?

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Axolotllove3rs

@MANEKOs it's fine. I understand bro, take your time
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MANEKOs

@ MANEKOs  I already finished the drawing but I can't find the time to upload it 
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Axolotllove3rs

So, chat, here are the plans for the remakes of TIOT.
          
          -expand the chapter count. Previously I only did bellow 20 for LBJMWHIH and TTAHD. I will increase the count to 20 or above.
          -Make the scenes a little more climactic. The fight with Mia in LBJMWHIH will still be anticlimactic, as that's due to her resisting the might of Apex. Next, Lumi will have much more playtime in the book, as to make a good battle with him.
          -removing the "real humans into creatures" thing. I figured it might be disrespectful to those specific people, and the dead people.
          -lower the sexual content. There still will be mentions of sex and so, otherwise some characters in lore will not work out (Axo and Mai)
          -Straight up rebuild TIOM. Entire new plot. The old one sucked.
          -give charecters names. The only side charecters that have names are Flurr's friends, Sparks, the virtues, the sins, and Aloy. Jeez I forgot we had him.
          -make a geographic table of the area.
          -expand the series with a prequel AND The Islands Of Dawn, The islands Of Dusk and The Islands Of Midday
          -Make the Bio's of each character.

Fl00fyFoxx

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@Axolotllove3rs OHHHHH SHIT IM EXCITED 
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Axolotllove3rs

Heya.
          
          So... The Islands of Midnight has ended, huh? Before it's first anniversary? A bit rushed, is it not?
          
          ... well.
          
          I will probably make remakes around the first anniversary of the series or around summer break. I will also make a prequel someday (after TMW and DRK are done), and answer some questions about the books! If you have questions about the book's lore, story or development, feel free to ask away!

Axolotllove3rs

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Fun fact about TIOT:
          Every character is based of a real person
          
          Axo - Micheal Covach (no need to explain)
          Axid - La Niña de los Peine (Spanish singer that is DEAD)
          Slimara - Adriana Nikolova (famous Bulgarian beatboxer)
          Draco - Adolf. I won't say the second name.
          Gabriella- Tsuneko Okazaki (scientist)
          Lorys - Sun Tzu (HE DID NOT SAY THAT SHIT)
          Flurr - One of my friends OC's
          Nolan - Toby "what's a time signature" Fox.
          Mia - Elena-Evgenia
          Leah - Queen Seondeok of Silla
          Blaze - again, my friends OC but I like to think he's Vladimir Putin
          Lumen - Alan Turing
          
          Albeit, Lumi is not a person in real life. From lore, he was a human brought to this world without any changed whatsoever. Remaining a human with the same name

Fl00fyFoxx

@Axolotllove3rs No cuz I searched em up and... Yes.
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