Aisha Bello

@pwritesthem if you're interested in vote for vote.. so..??

@pwritesthem huh? 

@IcyMoonSword I'd like to drop out from being a judge, sorry. I'm just having A LOT of problems with my current book, so I don't think I'd be able to. I would've loved to be a judge tho. Again, I'm so so so so so so sorry!! Thanks anyway 

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@another_human_gal ohhhhh I see I have been struggling with making them longer but thank u so much for pointing that out and also I'm so so sorry that u can't get Williams appearance but if it helps he is black haired I'm terribly sorry about that but I will make the chapters longer (I'll try my very best) and also Ill edit the book when I'm done and emphasize points tht need to be emphasized thank you so much I really needed someone to tell me this

@another_human_gal I'm loving the story but quick tip, you should try to make your chapters a tad bit longer. I'm guessing now they're like 500-700. You need to make them like 1000-3000, if you can. Try to put heavy emphasis on characters movements and they're thoughts. And describe your characters so readers can imagine what they look like. Readers should be able to have vivid imagination on what characters look like. Like rn, I'm guessing William is tall, slim, blonde, blue eyes. But I might be wrong. So you need to work on that. Also write it like a book, right now I'm getting movie-ish play vibes from it. My chapters now are 1900-2000 and just cover one scene. Just a quick tip from one writer to another. Loving the plot, keep it up darling. 

@another_human_gal oooooo thank youuuu

@another_human_gal i loved the synopsis. It was giving Queen Charlotte vibes, lol. I'm sure I'll love it!!! 

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