Aynjele

@realjeffseymour,
          	I'd give specific feedback or comment if the app would let me.
          	FYI, thank you for writing & posting your work. I treasure stories, finding them, reading them & being able to communicate with fellow writers :-) 

CliffJonesJr

I'm so excited for you to finish Adelaide! You're the first person I've seen read through it (with voting) in a while. The story comes to a conclusion, so don't let this put you off, but I've got one final third to this story in the works. The three books of Adelaide in Ozghard are going to be titled "Down the Rabbit Hole", "Over the Rainbow", and "An Awfully Big Adventure". Get the references? The first two are easy. The last one is from Peter Pan and is kind of ambiguous and scary.

CliffJonesJr

@CliffJonesJr I meant to say "write book 3 of Adelaide *first*"! Of course I'm going to write both, time permitting. Time on earth, I mean.
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CliffJonesJr

@CliffJonesJr Thanks for reading Two-Headed Lamb as well! Sorry all I've got so far are those 5 chapters. I've got 18 planned, but first I'm probably going to have to write book 3 of Adelaide so I have something ready actually sell.
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