Ayo_tomixoxx

@lillya  don't worry I'll sis. Everything turns out surfy ;)

JaysArmy

p.s. You did insult her writing. At least have the decency to claim that. 
          
          p.s.s. I am having a super duper life, thanks lovely. I just thought I'd spare a moment from my glorious world to knock the delusion out that little head of yours. Don't be waving a white flag after firing the first shot.

JaysArmy

@Ayo_tomixoxx Okay.
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Ayo_tomixoxx

@JaysArmy never mind. just know i will make my critical comments nicer.
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JaysArmy

@Ayo_tomixoxx sorry, but I do not understand what you mean?
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JaysArmy

Oh, stop the mature act sweetheart. Everything you say is a contradiction; you tell me I'll go nowhere and now you're stating you're no better then me... Sighs* faith in humanity lost. Do not simply assume that because a story is not edited it is not worthy. Curse. Are you kidding me right now, if I take out the curse words the message is still the same. 
          
          Good thing I'm not worried about being attractive, then, huh. 
          
          Clearly you do not understand how much simple words can effect a person. You are oblivious to the fact that behind the screen another person sits and reads these ridiculous comments. 
          
          And, people like you sweetheart, are the reason there are wars in the world!

JaysArmy

@Ayo_tomixoxx If you understood you would have been more classy with your comment. Go write a book and then get back to me. Your replies alone have many issues and are hard to comprehend, for starters work on capital letters. 
            
            Your initial point is ridiculous, do you not understand how incredibly immature you sound, by enforcing it... If a reader can not read a story, then they do not have to. It is not a writer on WATTPADs job to ensure there are no grammatical errors, why, simply because it's not a place for PROFESSIONALS. 
            
            If you are struggling with understanding a story, I suggest you go discard it. Leave. It. Alone. Move on with your life and never look back. Because it'll be our loss, right, not yours. So, to make it incredibly clear to you; don't comment idiotically and should you wish to, do it with class. Xo.
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Ayo_tomixoxx

@JaysArmy i dont even want to be philosophical right now. I am someone who should understand what little words do to a person. so do not think i do not know. I didn't contradict myself. I said if your mistakes are not corrected you will go nowhere. Everybody is equal, so yeah im no better than you and you aren't better than me. TO prove my point we are arguing like 3 year olds. 
            
            Now i never said anything about a story being unworthy because it is unedited, i said readers should not struggle to read what the author is trying to say. simple. plain. english.
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CynthiaRayneOfficial

this message may be offensive 
Firstly, it's nice to see you've checked out my profile. Since you're quoting from it -.-
          
          (Let me just point out that theres a significant difference between constructive criticism and simply being a bitch. Offer your opinion in a civilised manner, this isn't planet of the apes so attacking a writer personally without justification claiming you're trying to "help" is just pathetic in every sense of the word. 
          
          It's quite fucking rich to have readers insult your writing and then go spouting some bullshit about writers not being able to take "constructive criticism," bitch I'll reconstruct your face if you go pulling that shit. This is Wattpad not fucking RandomHouse Publishing, you're not a professional critic so calm the fuck down; unless you'd like me to become Caesar and go all ape shit on your ass.
          
          If you lack the decency of avoiding content you don't enjoy reading then be prepared to face the backlash, seriously who the fuck do some of you people think you are? -.-  #HadEnoughWithTheBitches)
          
          In case you were preparing to deny it.
          
          Secondly, the one error you found in my novel was in fact minor in comparison to the many others. Are you honestly so dense that none of those stuck out to you? 
          
          Have an opinion by all means, but insult my literary skill; my writing and prepare for an extremely indecent reply.
          
          That's all,
          
          C¥NTH!A

CynthiaRayneOfficial

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@Ayo_tomixoxx Than stop acting like a fucking child and contradicting yourself. You still don't understand that your criticism isn't what insulted me. I know my work needs to be edited which is why I clearly sate it's UNEDITED, but you need to understand that there's a manner in which you could have offered the exact same criticism. Then my dear, I would have replied very differently and maybe even respected that you had the decency to do so.
            
            Watch how you come at people if your intentions really are to help and not insult.
            
            C¥NTH!A
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JaysArmy

@Ayo_tomixoxx But she did not spell the word wrong... she simply put a different word in its place... -.- so your comment about spelling makes no sense and is flawed.
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Ayo_tomixoxx

@SaintAndTheStripper now i have not said a word of my "SOB" darling. 
            
            I am sorry my comment was mean but my comment on the spelling still stands . Now im not mean, am i? 
            
            we all have a lot to learn but im far from a little girl honey.
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JaysArmy

Firstly, I was being sarcastic; I know someone as arrogant as you could never be a publisher. Secondly, a publisher has indeed approached me (BLVNP)... Christ love, get them ridiculous facts straight. Honey, I'm already somewhere... Unlike you... -.- only idiots can not understand, all my readers have common sense and are able to put two and two together. The real issue here is your intelligence. 
          
          See this is where we differ; in my eyes there are never 'nobodies', every one in my life whether it be online or not is personal. You need to understand that if you're willing to dish out criticism then prepare to have it served right back on a silver plater. Xo.

Ayo_tomixoxx

@JaysArmy Plus I did not even insult your sister. I said If she wants to write, she should learn to spell. Criticism, she should spell things right so her readers do not need to correct her in their heads. If you do not understand english as simple as that. Then I really should not wast my time talking to you. Have a super great life.
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Ayo_tomixoxx

@JaysArmy I have no interest in being a publisher. That's good for you, you have publishers knocking on your door. I do not truly care about all that. My statement of somebody and nobody, you misinterpreted. Everyone is a someone, no matter how little. Then again, everyone has a different way of defining it. Dude, you are not better than me and vice versa. Do not compare our different earnings honey. I am somewhere today, do not mistaken that.
            
            I take criticism, as much as I give it sweetheart. You take your own advice and do not blow up. Its highly unattractive, because I messaged your sister, not you. So calm down, back up and chill out. You do not know me, I do not know you. Now understand it's a book not a fighting pit, we are not bloody apes. Act like a human being, not an animal and be civilized. People like you are the reason the world would be thrown into nuclear chaos. I have been calm and I have not cursed you out yet.
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JaysArmy

Oh, I'm sorry, didn't realise you worked for random house publishing! -.- smart ass. Unless you're a editor by profession keep that damn loose mouth of yours shut. This is Wattpad, sweetheart, who the fûck do you think you are telling people they can't upload a story without it being edited; are you the bloody author, no. So zip it. Simple. If it was so bad why the fûck does she have over two thousand followers and more than a million views collectively... Damn, looks like you're in the minority, here!

Ayo_tomixoxx

@JaysArmy i am no publisher, but I can see why a publisher would never look in your direction sweetheart. Everybody makes mistakes. I understand that but mistakes that many do make authors like you or your sister recognized. Reduce your mistakes. LEARN, then you will get somewhere.
            
            Although i will say I am no appropriate judge. You are an author and you are supposed to make it easy for readers to understand what you write not make it difficult. It's criticism honey, take it or leave it. However you take it is your business not mine. 
            
            Everybody is criticised in whatever area they do work in. So chill out man. Everybody and nobody is special. You need to understand that.
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JaysArmy

You need to learn the definition of constructive criticism, sweetie. She has clearly stated it is UNEDITED and of course when she goes over it she will figure it out. I don't care if you're her sister or not, I am SaintAndTheStrippers sister, love. It makes no difference. 
          
          And, are you actually that ignorant; writers constantly mess up words, hell even published authors have mistakes. If you couldn't understand what she ways saying I would understand, but the fact that your picked up on such a irrelevant matter concerns me deeply as there are much more important things to worry about.
          
          Don't insult a writer unless you've actually written three entire novels on a damn iPad that is glitchy as fùck! And, don't expect to comment on our stories without receiving any backlash. Xo, sweetheart.

Ayo_tomixoxx

@JaysArmy first of all I know what constructive criticism is. Seondly all the stuff you are saying, honestly doesn't move me. You need to understand that before something is published it should already be edited. Do not publish an unedited book. Unless that is how you were educated in your writing, then i guess it is what you know and understand.
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