theApocalypse369

I write Bls and I have just started writing(newbie), so I would be really glad if you could review my work and give feedback on my work.
          It would be really helpful to me to improve my skills.Sorry to bother you(⁠◍⁠•⁠ᴗ⁠•⁠◍⁠)
          
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