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Wow, this protagonist was one of the most striking ones I've read in Overlord fanfics, I didn't expect Lucian to be somehow Ulbert's friend who left Nine's Own Goal and was the one who obtained the power of a world boss, but without the level cap, it would only be missing that he was the one to whom Bellriver revealed some secret information about a corporation before being killed.
As for the relationship with Mei Mei, it's excellent, as long as the yandere level doesn't reach the point where they want to kill the competition, it's acceptable. It was also quite original to describe Lucian as someone androgynous, since there are too many describing the protagonist as the typical prince or with a terrifying appearance. Also, the level of detail in the depth of the mythology in the game was worthy of even becoming something canonical.
I could say that I was just left wanting to see the defense of the Top 10 guild bases in action after having attacked the mysterious guild of 3 people. Although there was also a lack of more development for Kazeumi Kumi since I always liked the detail of the NPCs imagining that she gives life to beings using her voice, not to mention that the life of a celebrity with her perverted brother could have been extended much more.
Lastly, I hope that the changes in the Nazarick NPCs are for the better since a war against the protagonist would be regrettable.
PS: No matter how many years pass, I promise to continue this story until the promise of surpassing 200 to 300 chapters and including crossovers is fulfilled.
PS 2: There are so many waifus that it would be a shame to limit it due to the censorship of “R18, Lemon, Smut”, so the best option would be to have a backup in “AO3 and WebNovel” in case Wattpad deletes it.
PS 3: In case the first version is written in Spanish because it is the author's main language, I wouldn't mind commenting in Spanish next time since on Wattpad most of the fics are in Spanish.
@AzazelGrim
