Aziraphael

@roxxy2o9 All good I was having trouble too.

Aziraphael

@IsuruAbeysinghe Thank you, it is rough indeed. But I had to start somewhere, and I've begun by throwing all my ideas at the screen to see what's underneath all the confusion. I'm really glad you fanned me I'd love to get your feedback as the book, and hopefully my writing, progress. Your book is next on my list, never fear. 

IsuruAbeysinghe

I decided to fan you, even though your unedited work is still a little rough in places, I think your originality and concept, as well as the way you describe (imagery) and build the characters is promising. It's also a little dark which I'm sort of into. I think you might like my book when you get around to reading it, there are some overlapping themes of dystopia and apocolypse, factionalization of humanity and struggle. This has a lot of potential - and I'm only up to chapter 4.