Babylonian_1

@ Azpapz  I didn't suggest that she shouldn't use seduction rather, I find it laughable that she would sleep with anyone just to extract potentially useless information, keep in mind that she is a VIRGIN so she shouldn't be very willing to have sex that easily. She could seduce them, make them overly comfortable, and have them fall in love with her, rather than sleep with anyone merely on the chance they might know something beneficial. Additionally, as you mentioned, she could have developed a beneficial relationship with Anna, who is a very important character. Unfortunately, the focus seems to be more on sex than on making a beautiful and intricate storyline. That's why I was voicing my opinion. I was very disappointed because I know this author is talented; she just chooses not to write well-developed characters.

Babylonian_1

@ Azpapz  not spread my legs for everyone and everything? Perhaps Y/N's character could have been portrayed as highly intelligent, well-built, and manipulative as a spy should be described. Instead, the author chose to make her lazy and use the easy way to get information. This decision seems less about the author's effort and more about appealing to an audience that enjoys seeing Y/N in frequent sexual situations. It's very sad because the storyline has great potential, and Y/N could have been a much more complex and intriguing character.

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@ Azpapz  you cuck sucker I'm a writer as well bitch that's why I'm saying that she could've wrote ANY other scenario but she chose this one because she knew horny bitchs like you would like to see a girl get fucked by another girl's dick while being belittled like we're in the middle ages. If you want a dick so badly while being looked down on I suggest finding... What do they call it? Oh yeah, a man. And stop getting offensive just because someone voiced their opinion

Babylonian_1

And who tf is speaking to you? Don't interrupt b*tch, unless you want my leg shoved up your a$$:)

Azpapz

@Babylonian_1 to be fair I like your opinion but I didn't like the way you voiced it it sounds offensive but I also like the story not for the smuts but I think it's what most people would do in that place I'm not saying there whores or anything it's just my thoughts 
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Azpapz

@Babylonian_1 then again if she gets cought being a manipulator and spy she would suffer either death or torture but if she manages to seduce the other talon Alphas especially Anna then she could escape death or torture... possibly 
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