Azumar29

So I updated my KC fic after months. This is in regard for MY birthday month. Yeay! Also if you look at the chapter title it was a Korean words. There's a K-drama with that title and I like the sound of it.

djv5surrey

Hi Azumar29...presume u must be busy...not resuming ur interesting story...?

djv5surrey

@Azumar29 
            
            Oh...there's another ardent reader wishing for their life together...and I highly recommended ur story....
            
            Well I hope that spark of ideas just get triggered and the writing juices just flow....!!!
            
            Best wishes at work and at play...!!!
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Azumar29

@djv5surrey hi. Want to cont it but need a muse. lol. There's already an old draft that I still not completed since last year. I'll come back but still need time. Tq for reaching me. :)
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djv5surrey

@Azumar29 
          Btw whr do u live..?
          
          Yes...the beginning as always seemed promising...but the story got so lame..
          Both actors deserve way better. .just not them...
          
          A trifle better than MHIL...those antics were like high school...
          
          MFS..Y/A
          
          Too many hits and misses...
          
          I liked that they showed that desperate side of her as a teen..stopping at nothing to serve her end...
          
          The repercussions were downright serious but they made light of the payback...and his capitulation was such a walk over...
          
          It was supposed to be a farmhand's shack..but was as pristin as a five star dwelling..yeah..she had the means to give it a designer look..but this looked too smooth ..
          
          She was supposedly forever hungry and worked to the bone..but she looked as fresh as a daisy and healthy as a horse...
          
          

djv5surrey

So Wayree was relatively nice...Great lead pair..nice story...reconciliation was well handled without compromises...

djv5surrey

@Azumar29 
            O..i..c....    commute NKVE..
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Azumar29

@djv5surrey lol, I'm working at Subang but stay in kl
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djv5surrey

@Azumar29 
            Bandar Utama..PJ..
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djv5surrey

Hi Yoeda83..with Dawei I felt it not fair 2 deviate 2 much frm the lakhorn...I inserted the elements..just worked around it differently..I didn't want to go into the pregnancy complications etc..it wouldn't serve much purpose in my version as their issues bn resolved...

djv5surrey

@Azumar29 
            Yeah...he did a good job..I was all for it till Epi 4...he.. the insufferable overindulged, self centered cocky guy...and she steadfast in her love..took his brickbats while keeping her dignity intact..
            
            and so oooooh..
            
            .. I was so sore they turned her into this ninny, vying 4 his attention playing cute in Dawei..then showing him the door aftr having it her way..
            
            ...and him..turned into this classless dude..resorting to intoxicating a woman to get her cooperating...that's rape in my dictionary..!!!
            
            What a waste of two otherwise fine actors...!!!
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Azumar29

@djv5surrey I totally hv a love hate relationship with MHIL. Lol. Love my Mark and his acting there but hate the story. Lol. Your Dawei was so much simple.
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djv5surrey

Hi Yoeda83  tqs vm 4 the vote...glad that the story has pleased a certain aspect of ur sentiment..
          
          The NY pair has bn in my orbit 4 sometime now... and I had been wanting to write something as a tribute to their coupledom..and I transposed an earlier piece I had written under a diff account that I lost ..casting them in it and adding a few changes here and there..
          
          FLAME...just completed abt an hr ago...

djv5surrey

@Azumar29 
            The pic confrmd its u..!!!
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Azumar29

@djv5surrey saw that and maybe I'll read it later. TBH beside TCP I can't finish any of Na lakorn. Lol.
            Also, if you saw my username is differ, don't be suspicious it still me. It coz I use Yoeda everywhere on my socmed so I need to differentiate here mostly coz of my writing.
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djv5surrey

Tqs vm Yoeda83 for the follow...hope to c more of ur stories too...do go ahead with the Thit and Jee saga as u c it ..even if it is a flashback..nvmd about the sentence construction..the substance is more enticing..u should upload that u have intended to present..sounds interesting...I like my characters cerebral..
          

djv5surrey

@Azumar29 
            Great...!!!
            Looking fwd to an exciting read...
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Azumar29

@djv5surrey Good news, I'll cont with my ThitJee saga. In editing process right now for chapter 2.
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djv5surrey

U got a good point there...nvr thought of it that way.. 
          
          Nt sure if u do hve time to spare..but should u.. I would love ur honest op abt Dawei.. 
          
          If u scroll thru the comments in youtube aftr the lakhorn..u'd wld find hardly much ppl thinking along ur lines...
          
          Most just ooh and aah at whatever is dished out...
          
          The producers, writers and directors really need a rethink of their productions..
          
          

Azumar29

@djv5surrey oh sorry about the Dawei. huhu. I've read it a little bit before but stop. I'll cont to read it again and give you my opinion later.
            Lol. It's the chemistry that sold the lakorn also Mark Prin hotness. If not about that, ppl will flee. If you ever read AFN forum, even the fans have a hard time with the storyline but they love the OTP.
            Same with Likit Rak, it's Yadech that sold the lakorn so it's became popular more than in Thai. Imagine being like me who watch it without knowing anything about koojin or Yadech, so I nitpick everything. It's unfortunate LR being my first pick of lakorn after so many years doesn't watch any. The story beyond ridiculous for me but I'm loving Yaya there.
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djv5surrey

Hi Yoeda83..sori..just curious..r u married/in a relationship..?
          
          I'm not sure how u view it but in reference to KC and MHIL both directed by the one and same person I don't get why she has reduced two dignified women into petty females with the progress of the story unlike in Sawan Biang which I believe she directed as well where the female lead remains steadfast abt her stand till the very end, relenting with great difficulty and finally finding healing..
          
          In both KC and MHIL both ladies desperately wanted the man to relent and when he does so they decide to do an about face..
          
          I wonder how many females realise that this is exactly the kind of juvenile behavior that stirs a man's ire and puts him  off completely..
          
          ..in the series it shows the guy going out of his way to coax the girl...but reality is another thing..most guys would rather want out and look around for a hassle free no nonsense relationship..
          
          For that I salute My Secret Bride (it's written by a man btw..) The hero and heroine handle and settle their issues in a respectable, dignified and mature manner..

Azumar29

@djv5surrey I'm definitely more emotional too. But maybe came with age I little bit wiser. In my book, Dawin is not a mere bodyguard, he is a high ranking soldier who have skill and his own team. So, what with Alan? If some day he fall in love with his female BG. Do he need to forgo his throne too. Why can't Alice have her man and the throne too? In my op, grandpa can change the rules about royalty marriage. I think Alice mom also a commonner. This is totally BS in term of gender equality. So, the writer kinda fail there.
            Same with MHIL, when Anne said she change the story from the book eveeyone expected that Tien will let Moey further her study. But, instead she throw all that pregnancy shenanigan. Even that, she doesn't made it better. She kind butcher it with all the choppy editing.
            In my opinion, sometimes Anne vision about love conquer all is kinda meh. Her empowerment of woman still lacking here and there on her most lakorn.
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djv5surrey

@Yoeda83 
            
            I gather u'r a very practical person..by ur sentiments..and the Thit u have presented.. : )
            
            ..I'm not..
            
            ...more emotional..
            
            ....idealistic even..
            
            ..in TCP the character Alice relenquished her crown as her love for her commoner bodyguard took precedence...in order for her to rule she would have to marry into royalty....so I wouldn't consider this a weakening of her character..
            
            The CEO giving it all up is definitely unnecessary...she could still retain her position and have her man too...
            
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djv5surrey

@Yoeda83 
            
            Yeah...the Muey was super annoying..turning ninny upon landing in Dawei till the end..Tien like u said saved the series by turning from insufferable to sensible..
            
            I wrote Dawei right after the Epi of him getting her intoxicated into submission..
            
            So so not done in my book..
            
            I gave it a different premise.. even with throwing  in the alcohol factor, divorce, pregnancy and their eventual reconciliation..
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