Your first fanfiction about KBTBB is pretty good for a starting writer. If you continue like this, Hopefully you can become a successful fanfiction writer. I am intrigued and I wish for you to continue. I myself am not that good of a writer, However as you say you struggle with English and grammar, Don't be afraid to ask me. I hope we can become friends as we will probably share a lot of things in common. -YushinaKuze