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@Conduit_Vance I'm going to stop writing for a while. Preparing for my pre-service course.

@Anonymous24uare He brought it back

My bad, just felt worried when he announced the bear cancelation. It was bad enough when @Anonymous24uare lost his account.

@VincentXVB Chill bro. I would be disappointed and annoyed yes, but I wouldn't give him hate

@AzurePlayer Don't take it down!

@AzurePlayer Just ask someone for help with your story.

@AzurePlayer Just leave it. Only put it into hiatus status instead.

@Anonymous24uare Thinking of new plots for RWBY: Rise of the Star-banner.

@AzurePlayer personally I don’t think this is a good direction since it basically becomes a Deus ex machina, I win and basically ends the story there. Invading Atlas would be a good call though and you’ve been setting up a conflict between America and Atlas in the story already. If you want America to invade the kingdoms then you could simply add more chapters where they get the tech to stand at least a fraction of a chance against the U.S. military but its more of an, Operation Desert Storm type chance where they get obliterated within weeks if not less time. But if you feel that this is the direction you want to go in instead of everything you’e written in it up until now then that’s your decision. Personally though I don’t think this is a good direction for the story because it effectively ends it before it even begins. Not much build up, and then bam, conflict is resolved in less than two seconds. It’s much more interesting going with the diplomacy route in my opinion. Granted you’ve pretty much set it up so far so that Atlas will inevitably go to war against the U.S. since they foolishly believe that they’ll have a fraction of a chance with AGEA tech. It would be boring in my personal opinion if you simply rewrote it so that the U.S. and the kingdoms basically go to war almost immediately. Again, this is my personal opinion. Personally I love the story as it is now. It’s fantastic in my opinion and you’ve done a fantastic job writing it. But if you decide to go ahead and rewrite the entire thing then that’s your decision. Personally I’d think it would be a damn shame but if you believe that you need to rewrite the story to fit this new narrative then that’s your choice. Just make sure you really think on it so you’re absolutely certain this is the decision you want to make since there won’t be any turning back once you do. (Maybe save a copy of the original story as it is now just in case) but ultimately that’s your decision.

@AzurePlayer Interesting... Let's see how it plays out.

OH MY GOD YOU SHOULD DO THAT!!! But it will probably take you too rewrite the entire thing.