GameLis

A new chapter is up. I'm still having a hard time with the fight scenes but it seems to be a lot better than my initial notes. As always constructive criticism is always welcome!

Looking for advice on how to write fight scenes. I struggled through editing that last chapter a lot because of my insecurity with it. 
          Any suggestions or tips are greatly appreciated!

I have just noticed that I've mixed in my chapters notes to my uploads instead of the actual chapters..well, at least these are the second draft notes, my first draft notes are fit for only a sailor to read. I'll be correcting some chapters over the next few days. 
          
          I'll post when we're up and running again....( The computer with my drafts in it is in a cabinet at work... Oops!)

Thanks for the follow!!! Welcome to my madness.

I thought as a kid fight scenes would be fun, but they are SO hard to write.