emerald_angels

I just posted my first piece on Wattpad. It's a poem, so I'm having a hard time getting feedback on it. The title is "The time we would have spent togther (About losing a parent to cancer)." I'm not looking for votes. I just want to get feedback. It would mean a lot to me if you could read and comment on it.

wendyandpeterpan

hey (: 
          i'm sorry to bother you, but i was wandering if you could read 
          my story Medony? ;D 
          it's not good or anything, thats why i need feedback, (: 
          wellll, if you have time that would be amazing<3 
          but i understand if not <3 
          wellll ; take care (:

maryasha

hi, would you mind reading my story, i would love some constructive criticism and what you think about it
          
          "All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls
          
          Synopsis:
          
          Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her breasts constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have a chaotic relationship---if you can even call it that.
          http://www.wattpad.com/257206-quot-all-boys-school-survival-guide-quot-for-girls

newhope

U saw your profile pic and just had to say I LOVE IT! And seeing as i am already here.....i was wondering if you would take a look at my story The Art of hope? give me some feedback and all that good stuff? Thanks!