BCinfinity

A new poem for you, I hope you enjoy it.
          	
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/1504257727?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_writer&wp_uname=BCinfinity

novelistASH

I'm really glad I found *Wild Tree* again. I probably spent twenty minutes trying to find it and then you dropped a poem. The character work and mood is really strong. Good intrigue without being overstated. I'm eager to see where it goes.

BCinfinity

Thanks you so much for your interest, I will most definitely do my best to make it a book I can be proud of.
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kiapoetry_

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          Hy sorry for writing without your permission. 
          But if you have some spare time can you look at my poetry book and I love to get your feedback on it:>

BCinfinity

Ok, you know what? It’s alright. 
            
            I checked out the first poem, and I could see where you were going with it. The emotion in the poem is strong, and it feels quite authentic, but I felt the repetition of certain words made it feel like I knew you were trying to rhyme, I don’t know if that makes sense? But I mostly don’t want to read a poem and imagine how you wrote it. I really want to feel myself or a person in that poem.
            
            But asides from your literary style, I really like the thought process.
            
            Keep it up, you can only get better. ❤️
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