hi, would you mind checking out my story. Maybe critic it a bit and suggest ways to improve it? It's about a young rich boy who fights his attraction towards a bratty mean girl.
Thanks!!!
https://my.w.tt/UiNb/r8UaSTpRsI
They call you cry baby cry baby
But you don't even care
Cry baby cry baby so you laugh through your tears
(I love Melanie and I'm obsessed with her song Mad hatter)