BICOTHECREATOR

Feedback would be appreciated and suggestions 

BICOTHECREATOR

Well thank you and I'll work on the key components you outlined.
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badassnerd101

@Johhmy hi just wanted to let you know I commented some constructive criticism in your story , I can't wait to see and read how your writing improves over time. 
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BICOTHECREATOR

Feedback would be appreciated and suggestions 

BICOTHECREATOR

Well thank you and I'll work on the key components you outlined.
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badassnerd101

@Johhmy hi just wanted to let you know I commented some constructive criticism in your story , I can't wait to see and read how your writing improves over time. 
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