BL4Z3453

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          	I know you might not care about this at all but I'll post it anyway.
          	If you want you can research on the matter
          	
          	HAVE YA'LL FUCKING SEEN WHAT'S BEEN HAPPENING OVER HERE IN VENEZUELA (Yes, I'm Venezuelan)?!?!!?
          	LET'S FUCKING GOOO

BL4Z3453

this message may be offensive
Hi
          I know you might not care about this at all but I'll post it anyway.
          If you want you can research on the matter
          
          HAVE YA'LL FUCKING SEEN WHAT'S BEEN HAPPENING OVER HERE IN VENEZUELA (Yes, I'm Venezuelan)?!?!!?
          LET'S FUCKING GOOO

Kinglemur66

I saw your comment of all the power if you want to  still want to share I'm done

Kinglemur66

@BL4Z3453 i didn't see the first part that you posted so nevermind on the first part I said, god damn that's some trauma, I like it
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Kinglemur66

@BL4Z3453 It's good and I like the concept a lot. I'd change being a vigilante at 5 to him training his quirk privately until he is a bit older then maybe around the 9-10 age range he starts being a vigilante. 
            
            But that's me and this is your story concept, I struggle with the viability of a 5-year-old fighting grown adults even with a quirk. I find the 9-10-year range a good start because the quirk levels the playing field at that point. and he'd be old enough that he's not still just figuring out the world.
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