@SamSchloesing So far, I'm enjoying it. While your ability to actually use the English language to convey your story instead of whatever language the majority of the necrophilia and bestiality books have been written in was definitely a plus, you completely won me over with "the night was as dark as a cat's soul." Not to bash vampire and werewolf stories, but lately it seems like absolute garbage is accepted and even worse...celebrated. I suck majorly when it comes to comma splices, however, basic subject verb agreement and appearing to have at least run your story through a free grammar check program should be a requirement. Especially if I have to put up with stupid ads after nearly every chapter. It's worse than high school because such writing would have never been accepted in my high school. I apologize for my little rant, but I am so grateful when I find quality writing on here. I should probably move your story to a different list since I am actually reading it.
