Hi randomreaderlol
I came across your story *How it like living with austin [REMAKE]* and I just wanted to say it genuinely stayed on my mind longer than I expected.
There is something really honest about the way you wrote it. The idea of a normal guy just working at McDonald's and then suddenly everything changes at night felt simple but also very intriguing. That moment when “something broke in and now he has to find out who it is” created a quiet tension that pulled me in. It feels like the kind of story that doesn’t try too hard, but still makes you curious about what’s coming next.
I also noticed the tone you used, especially how you openly said you’re not sure about the grammar and that you’re just working with what you have. That actually made it feel more real. It felt like you’re just telling a story the way you see it, without trying to be perfect.
At the same time, I couldn’t help but feel like this story has more depth than it’s currently showing on the surface. The idea itself is strong, and the feeling behind it is there, but it feels like not many people are really seeing it yet. Like it hasn’t fully reached the kind of attention it could get.
I’m curious, have you ever published any of your work on Amazon or Goodreads, or are you planning to?
If you’re open to it, I’d honestly enjoy having a short conversation with you about your story and how you see it growing.