BOOKLOVER20002323

@xxdorkie thanks. Maybe I will get an editor. I can't wait to see what happens in pack and predudice.

xxDorkie

I really like the plot of your story, I also think you should proof read it or get an editor because I see some errors, but overall I really like where your story is headed and I'm excited to see what will happen next. (: 

BOOKLOVER20002323

Next story:
          
          A girl(Teresa) finds her mate a geeky scrawny boy,Cannon She accepted Derek, but he could never accept himself. He runs away but not without promising to meet his precious mate to see each other again in the future. The reason that he left was because his mate was the most popular girl in the school and she gave it up for her mate that she loved.
          
          

BOOKLOVER20002323

Here's a summery of a book I've been thinking about writing but I don't know if you guys will like it bit here you go:
            Next story:
          
          A girl(Teresa) finds her mate a geeky scrawny boy,Cannon She accepted Derek, but he could never accept himself. He runs away but not without promising to meet his precious mate to see each other again in the future. The reason that he left was because his mate was the most popular girl in the school and she gave it up for her mate that she loved.