wow zeheramrit is just a wow . just read 3 chapters and they were good but i won't continue cause i think they will probably be too much from me . lil secret - im 15 year old writer
Heyy author i Am reading your story it's good specially from stating chapter about Avni past you wrote is very good we can connect to the character there when you wrote it with Avni prov. But after that there I feel like I am not able to connect with character you should write prov even for one min. And I am sorry if I said something wrong which hurt you. I just want to help you to improve .
Ook i follow you I am not good at feedback but I try and in insta and youtube my username is Kdramaloveralways soo I will give you from this account feedback
@Piyupihu not at all babe I will definitely work on it and uk what thank u so so so much I needed more readers like uh thanks u so much can uh please follow me on insta and u tube too and yes it's not for followers but for the comments and feedback u give now I remember uh by ur username if u will give feedback there too it will be a favour on me
Insta = @writer_aira
U tube = unseen obsession handle @DarkFictionHub
I read ur book @BRUTTELLA.. and I'm loving it.. please update it further.. I'm really eager to read the upcoming chapters.. i just love it when u triple update it