Vansh6565

would you like to read my work and tell me how it is as i got no one other than chatgpt to tell me and can't trust AI too much

Vansh6565

wait i got a sister of mine to rate them . sorry for making such a silly request
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Vansh6565

that's totally mine i even got the raw copies saved with me for these questions only
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BRUTTELLA

@Vansh6565 everyone do that it's fine until unless the content  is yours 
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Vansh6565

wow zeheramrit is just a wow . just read 3 chapters and they were good but i won't continue cause i think they will probably be too much from me . lil secret - im 15 year old writer

Vansh6565

its rating is 18+ and i'm 15 , gotta follow the rules
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Piyupihu

Heyy author i Am reading your story it's good specially from stating chapter about Avni past you wrote is very good we can connect to the character there when you wrote it with Avni prov. But after that there I feel like I am not able to connect with character you should write prov even for one min. And I am sorry if I said something wrong which hurt you. I just want to help you to improve .

Piyupihu

Ook i follow you I am  not good at feedback but I try and  in  insta and  youtube my username is Kdramaloveralways soo I will give you from this account feedback 
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BRUTTELLA

@Piyupihu not at all babe I will definitely work on it and uk what thank u so so so much I needed more readers like uh thanks u so much can uh please follow me on insta and u tube too and yes it's not for followers but for the comments and feedback u give now I remember uh by ur username if u will give feedback there too it will be a favour on me 
            
            
            Insta = @writer_aira
            U tube = unseen obsession handle @DarkFictionHub
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