BTSFan94

@BTSFan94 the book was amazing, yes I loved it. Though I did not feel there was anything wrong with the book but without the negativity in the book, there wouldn't be a good story. There is nothing to be embarrassed about and remove it or anything but that's just my opinion and whatever you decide to do, as a reader and a fan of your work, I support you. I really wanted to read it and it was one of the stories that kept me hooked but nevertheless it has been unpublished and I understand where you are coming from. If you do edit and decide to publish it, I will read it immediately.

@BTSFan94 I also loved this story so much and while I understand what you mean and support you editing if it will make you feel better, I don’t think you have to be embarrassed or upset.    People will always find something to criticize and IMO books with no difficult content are boring and unrealistic.  Real life and sex and relationships are messy; we don’t have to hide that in our fiction for others comfort.   ((Hugs)) I hope it comes back soon

@BTSFan94, I also agree with Mikey_Styles. I don’t think you have anything to be embarrassed about. As taboo as the plot is, the story is well written the characters, all four of them are consenting adults. You wrote the characters very well and was able to depict the emotions (female sexual empowerment, carnal lust, jealousy, desperation, insecurity, & some debauchery) and the consequences each character experience’s  (what they take away from this life’s lessons) within this type of relationship. Please continue the book, I would love to fine out what happened to Jimin during his shower mental breakdown and who y/n ends up with. Or will she have the strength to walk away from the whole arrangement all together?