@BTSXARMYOT74EVER
Hi Readers, I am taking a break from writing Unscripted Hearts for a few days at least. I haven't had time to write the past couple of weeks due to a huge project at work. I will continue but may skip most of their September activities except for the ones together so I can get more current in the story. I'm hoping I can write this week and upload again next weekend. I'm always grateful for those of you who read and comment.
Hi Readers,
You may see notifications for updates to the earlier chapters of Unscripted Hearts. I'm not making material changes to the content, just correcting some mistakes I've noticed with my last read through so future readers have a cleaner story. Thanks again for following my work!
If you could read and tell me what you think about the story ThamePo – Hearts Together in On a Beat, I’d be super grateful. It was my first fanfic, and I honestly don’t think it could get any better.
I wrote it as a direct continuation of the series, exactly how I wished the story would unfold.
And since you write so well, I’d really love to hear your opinion.
@williames4ev Wow. English isn't your first language? You did phenomenal. I am learning another language and I could never write an actual story in the that language yet. Kudos to you!!!
@BTSXARMYOT74EVER Thanks a lot for the feedback! Since English isn’t my first language, I did get some help with a few parts of the translation. I’m already revising everything and the updated texts will be up soon. I liked your tip about the flashbacks, it’ll definitely help make the reading clearer. Overall, I’m really happy you enjoyed the story!
@williamest4ev I've read all of the published parts. The story is really good. Just a couple of things I noticed as I was reading. Overall, in the earlier chapters, the bouncing back and forth between old memories and the present was a bit confusing, maybe use a bit more of a indication when the memory starts and ends. Also, in Chapter 15, who is DRAVEIX? It seemed like it was the new company Mars signed with but in earlier chapters that company's name was ONENINE so I'm not sure where that fits in. The end of Chapter 16 looks like something got cut off, maybe the kiss between Anne and Jun that Dylan and Jun fight about in the next chapter? I'm sure we all use ChatGPT for those paragraphs we need just a bit of help on but be sure to go back and read them, I've notice when I ask it to rewrite a sentence or paragraph for me, it will randomly throw in weird names or references that don't make sense. Anyway, I really love the story, keep building on it. Looking forward to reading more!
Woooww!! Your writing is insane, I legit can’t stop reading.
How are you doing? I love your stories so much I really hope you’ll keep writing!
@elleedlaaa Aww. Thank you so much. I will definitely keep writing. My schedule has been crazy lately so I haven't been able to write as much but I'm trying to get caught up on my ongoing story. There is so much content to review and sometimes I have to manually translate it using a translator app which takes a lot of time but I LOVE writing about WE.
Love your Stories
Hoping for more EstWilliam and NutHong.