It's probably just me, but the level of writing on Wattpad in everything I see recently is awful at best. One can read only so much beginner level/ intermediate level work before dying from insanity. I'm not trying to be rude, those people will work on their skills to the point where they will be writing awesome sauce but I need more. 22 going on 23 means uping the reading game, so give me what you got, and I'll give constructive criticism if you want but will other wise, usually, not say a damn thing about your book.