Dear B_alicorn21
I really enjoyed your story, you're a very imaginative writer! Even though I don't really watch this show, I nontheless found myself enthralled in the story and actually became concerned for the wellbeing of the characters, wanting to see how their fates will conclude.
Another thing I liked was your vivid descriptions of all the details and the emotions/thoughts of the characters. I even felt anxious as I read the chapters about the prison escape, all the precise bits of information on the escape plan and the suspense building up to it made it very easy for me to picture it as if I was there, and you left nothing out.
You're very talented and I'd LOVE to see more in the future!
