BaByFaCe17

@smokeytex74 No problem :-) 

DARKSIDE0FTHEM00N

Hey I read nobody's home and it was very good, but you had some gramatical and spelling errors. If you want i could help or you could have someone you know help. I think you will get alot more votes for it if you fix the minor mistakes. 
          
          If I come off as rude I apologize I am just trying to help. Like I said it was a good story, but you can make it great.