Hi! Sorry for plugging!
I have an on going story and I don't know if it's good or bad. I badly need a critique to improve what is need to improve ㅠ.ㅠ
Please give my story a chance ㅠ.ㅠ
Ps. Thank you Ms. A for letting me plug on your Message Board (◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*。
https://my.w.tt/au3KC3FrXcb