Baby_Ary_

@JadeFelton7  hey

galaxyofhyyh

I LOVE your Dance Central story!!! You are really good at slowly revealing the plot, and not rushing the storyline at all! Don't be afraid to develop the scenes a bit more though. The structure of them are great! But if you just add in tiny details about the environment of the scene, or go a little bit more in depth on what Remix is thinking (when in her POV) it would just enhance the amazingness that you've already established!! I can't wait for you to continue! (Sorry if you didn't want advice... I wasn't sure if you wanted any. )

lanaboo333

I know right
            
            Her work comes to life as you're reading it and you feel like you're there
            
            The feeling is magical.
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