freya_john01
I really enjoyed reading your story. The way you describe scenes makes everything feel very visual, and I found myself imagining a lot of moments as if they were panels from a comic. A few scenes even inspired some visual concepts and character expressions in my head.
If you're interested, I'd be happy to share some of those ideas with you. I think your story has a lot of potential for visual adaptation and in the meantime do you have any social where we can connect and talk more about this.