BackForever21

Chapter 3 and 4 are up now!

BackForever21

Hi guys!
          
          I just started a new book called The Queen Of Ombres. Since this is my first attempt at writing, I would be eternally grateful if you could take some time to read it and give me some tips on how to improve (because this is not my finest work lol xD).
          
          The first two chapters are already published and I'm about to publish the third one soon!
          
          Hope you all have a nice day ;)

TaeTaerritory

̶*̶̶ ̶̶c̶̶α̶̶υ̶̶τ̶̶i̶̶σ̶̶ท̶̶ ̶̶τ̶̶н̶̶i̶̶s̶̶ ̶̶м̶̶є̶̶s̶̶s̶̶α̶̶g̶̶є̶̶ ̶̶c̶̶α̶̶м̶̶є̶̶ ̶̶σ̶̶υ̶̶τ̶̶ ̶̶σ̶̶ƒ̶̶ ̶̶ท̶̶σ̶̶ω̶̶н̶̶є̶̶r̶̶є̶̶,̶̶ ̶̶s̶̶σ̶̶ ̶̶ρ̶̶ℓ̶̶є̶̶α̶̶s̶̶є̶̶ ̶̶s̶̶ρ̶̶є̶̶ท̶̶τ̶̶ ̶̶j̶̶υ̶̶s̶̶τ̶̶ ̶̶α̶̶ ̶̶s̶̶м̶̶α̶̶ℓ̶̶ℓ̶̶ ̶̶α̶̶м̶̶σ̶̶υ̶̶ท̶̶τ̶̶ ̶̶σ̶̶ƒ̶̶ ̶̶τ̶̶i̶̶м̶̶є̶̶ ̶̶τ̶̶σ̶̶ ̶̶r̶̶є̶̶α̶̶∂̶̶ ̶̶τ̶̶н̶̶i̶̶s̶̶ ̶̶σ̶̶ท̶̶є̶̶ ̶̶ ̶̶*̶̶ ̶
          
          ̶ρ̶̶s̶̶.̶̶ ̶̶α̶̶ ̶̶в̶̶i̶̶τ̶̶c̶̶н̶̶ ̶̶i̶̶s̶̶ ̶̶τ̶̶y̶̶ρ̶̶i̶̶ท̶̶g̶̶ ̶̶.̶̶ ̶̶.̶̶ ̶̶.̶̶ ̶
          
          нєℓℓσ нυмαท! 
          αcτυαℓℓy, i'м sσrry ƒσr cαℓℓiทg yσυ τнατ, i jυsτ ∂σท'τ кทσω yσυr ทαмє  ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
          
          αท∂ τнє ρυrρσsє σƒ ωнy i'м нєrє ωαs, i ωαทτє∂ τσ rєcσммєท∂ мy вσσк σท yσυ ◑▽◐
          
          iƒ iτ's σทℓy σк yσυ кทσω【ツ】
          
          iτ's cαℓℓє∂ ∂єατн αท∂ iτ's ทєωℓy ρυвℓisнє∂, sσ i ∂σท'τ нαvє τнατ мυcн rєα∂єrs τнєrє, вє ƒrєє τσ вє τнє ƒirsτ σทє τσ rєα∂ iτ! :) 
          
          cнєcк τнis ℓiทк 
          ↬ нττρs://мy.ω.ττ/вgq2ƒsℓciท
          
          σr jυsτ ταкє α ℓσσк σท мy ρrσƒiℓє, αท∂ ℓєαvє α мєssαgє σท мy cσทvєrsατiσท вσx, yσυ cαท sραм iτ ( ͡ʘ ͜ʖ ͡ʘ)
          
          αท∂ ∂σท'τ ƒσrgєτ i αℓωαys rєρℓy σท мєssαgєs sρєciαℓℓy iƒ yσυ'rє αท icє crєαм ;)
          
          αrє yσυ αท icє crєαм? 
          
          *ωнisρєrs* sαy ωнy
          
          cυʑ yσυ мєℓτ мy нєαrτ sσ ƒαsτ ✣
          
          ℓσℓ τнατ ωαs ωαy sσ criทgy, σк ƒσrgєτ τнατ, 
          jυsτ ρrєτєท∂ τнατ iτ ∂i∂ท'τ нαρρєทє∂ 
          
          σк ∂σท'τ ƒσrgєτ τнє ρυrρσsє σƒ τнis мєssαgє ⍨
          
          αท∂ τнαทк yσυ iƒ yσυ мα∂є iτ нєrє, αท∂ cσทgrατυℓατiσทs!! 
          
          *ωнisρєrs* yσυ кทσω sσмєσทєs συτ τнєrє ωнσ jυsτ cυτ rєα∂iทg σท sσмє ραrτ σƒ τнis мєssαgє, αท∂ i ∂σท'τ кทσω ωнy
          
          αм i τнατ вσriทg τσ ταℓк τσ? ●︿●
          i ωisн iм ทστ... 
          
          αท∂ ∂σท'τ ƒσrgєτ τσ ƒσℓℓσω ;)
          
          - ταєταєrriτσry ⚉

BackForever21

@TaeTaerritory 
            
            Hello to you too, um... let's call you human cuz I don't know your name too,
            
            I'll check your book and yes, I'm an ice cream. You've discovered my so well hidden secret (welp, until now). But I'm not those strawberry ice creams that everyone seems to like (sorry if you like them too), I'm more of those vanilla-chocolate ones.
            
            Lol, okay that turned really weird. 
            
            Anyway, I'll be happy to check your book and no, you're not boring at all :)
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