BadToeJoe

@minnie_057 I'd loves some thoughts on what I might do to write better.  I feel like I am kid a boring, like I am missing something?  Can you read my stuff and give me a critique? It's kind of silly, I know

@ThisGirl No prob! It's well deserved!

@minnie_057  you have some great writing.  I would love some pointers! :P