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Everything is fine! Don't rush. I don't think you can somehow ruin the story. So far everything is going well. The only thing I would like to advise you to make the events more intense or something (it's about time her asshole husband appeared on the scene) And, honestly, I ship Max and Amira, because I think their temperaments suit each other the most James is too indecisive and a mama's boy) But these are just my preferences, the story is yours and it's up to you to decide, of course) In any case, I just want to tell you not to lose heart, because you write great. Sooner or later, your work will gain popularity