Baguettesratyass

Hi 

MyChemicalShips09

I could tell that you liked it, but I couldn't bring my self to finish it so I kinda deleted it
Balas

Baguettesratyass

@MyChemicalShips09 over all really good story and hope you make the parts longer 
Balas

Baguettesratyass

@MyChemicalShips09 ok so I just read it and I think you should give more detail on how the characters look and the place they are and maybe more background information on the characters (I left a comment I hope u see it)
Balas

Baguettesratyass

Hi 

MyChemicalShips09

I could tell that you liked it, but I couldn't bring my self to finish it so I kinda deleted it
Balas

Baguettesratyass

@MyChemicalShips09 over all really good story and hope you make the parts longer 
Balas

Baguettesratyass

@MyChemicalShips09 ok so I just read it and I think you should give more detail on how the characters look and the place they are and maybe more background information on the characters (I left a comment I hope u see it)
Balas