Bairdmation1

Hello, it's been a while but I'm alive. You don't much time after high school to write but I'm slowly making progress on a few of my stories including Front Line Anomaly and The White High Rise. So, stay tuned if you are interested. The next time you get a notification from me one of the few stories would be completed and ready for you to read. I wish you all a great day and to those few who are in still the prison known as school I bid thee a good school year. Goodbye for now my friends.

Bairdmation1

Hello, it's been a while but I'm alive. You don't much time after high school to write but I'm slowly making progress on a few of my stories including Front Line Anomaly and The White High Rise. So, stay tuned if you are interested. The next time you get a notification from me one of the few stories would be completed and ready for you to read. I wish you all a great day and to those few who are in still the prison known as school I bid thee a good school year. Goodbye for now my friends.

user787567

Hi, sorry if i'm being annoying, but I was wondering if you could check out my book, I know this might be boring like "blah blah another promoting person" but i really want suggestions and feeback from you. I appreciate it a lot!!
          Here is the link:
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/336052508?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Rebeccastoriezzz&wp_originator=%2B5DagOVkNdANyFJIIaxBSsOTiNPPr4XoJm%2Fqfio5QgfPvJYWiAuqw7ZoTw49a5yCCUPUKBymBczHLNM54k5ehpVMO5i7Yb563xCbr%2FDK9i%2BtPaNx%2FWN0H8RL9QcDhAyH

Bairdmation1

@Rebeccastoriezzz Hello there, I'm not annoyed by your request. In my opinion it is perfectly fine to ask other writers to read your work for suggestions. I have read this story. I really liked the concept and the story it's very entertaining and I'm very much interested in how it's going to end. I would suggest instead of starting the beginning with the narrator explaining  what's about to happen maybe start from the Sienna perspective. My reason for this is you want your audience to be shocked when they see the copy during lunch. That I believe is the only thing I think needs some work but the rest seems good to me. Keep up the good work and have yourself a wonderful day.
            -Bairdmation
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Bairdmation1

Hello it's Bairdmation here. As you can see, I have posted my first story "Front Line Anomaly" the first book in my book series The Galxyscape Series. So, to read more of the series go to my other account.
          Stay tuned for more Galaxyscape News...

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https://www.wattpad.com/user/Bairdmation
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