Freshly Baked Cinnamon Roll

Thad is the ranger, Nori is the mage, but Nori is a revenant with a dual mission
            mission one: to bring down James Elliott, because he burned down the Doorman estate to acquire the sapphire serpent (he did not order this, he did it himself because he HATED the Doorman family, specifically Khan.)
            mission 2: aid her daughter in destroying the Absolute Solver
            i also think that Nori will only appear AFTER Uzi unlocks the vault
            idk when Thad should appear, but his connection to the party will be that he is a childhood friend of Uzi's.
            also the reason Lord Elliott hated Khan is that they once competed for the affection of Nori, and Nori chose Khan. at first James was happy for his best friend, but then fiendish and/or eldritch influences twisted his mind to make him jealous and hateful. this influence started shortly after Uzi was born. the estate was burned the night of Uzi's 16th birthday, after a gala was held in her honor. many believed it was the work of a devil, especially since the flames contained the heat of Avernus, first of the Nine Hells. Uzi was never found in the rubble, so much effort was put into finding her, but no trace of her was found.
            until now...
            an epic origin story in my opinion that i might use for D&D

@JAFT_127 I like part of this concept and I may use some of it (tho I won't reveal what I'm gonna use just yet). However I will say that there are two members of the party that have yet to be introduced if you wish to just spout out your ideas

*recovers from shock*

it's true

Thank you, I spent yesterday trying to come up with a few ideas so who knows, maybe you'll get something

here's the link if you need it
            
            https://www.reddit.com/r/MurderDrones/comments/1ghzhp1/help_motivate_this_writer/

done

@Joejdwuwbeieh it's gonna continue, I still have plans for it. I'm just working on other more horror based stuff since it's October

@MarshadowGaming555 that will get more chapters don't worry, I'm just trying to branch out and work on my other fics right now, specifically my horror related ones for Spooky month.

@0penpage Thanks for the reply. Yes I struggle to find faithful predator stories here. Perhaps my audience is elsewhere... Id be very interested in your feedback as a serious hobby writer. And most of all I hope you enjoy the story. 
            Now I must go and get some cinnamon buns from the shop. 

@0penpage it seems pretty interesting, an actual Predator story where the Yautja acts like a Yautja is something that Wattpad really lacks. Most of the Predator fanfics here are interspecies romance, not really my thing if it doesn't have the slow tension and kick ass action like the movies do. While I'm more of an Alien fan, I still fucking love the Predator movies

@Baked_Cinnamon_Rollz yaayyyyyyyyyyy

@Baked_Cinnamon_Rollz let's fucking gooooooooo

Ok

@Malachi56n I just wrote that one so I need time to come up with the next chapter

I do plan on making more of

@Baked_Cinnamon_Rollz OOOOHH that sounds more than good enough:))

@Kaizabird I don't want to say anything since that would spoil it, but I will tell you that Ducky would not be against his parents advancing in their relationships with their partners

@Kaizabird yeah, it feels like N doesn't want to have another kid again since he has ducky. So does Uzi