You asked me to tell you how I feel about your book so here’s what I think!
The ‘Female Sasuke x Female reader.’ Is an interesting book at the most maybe try not to rush so fast and do some flashbacks! Like how they met...and how they feel/think about each other so the reader can understand the relationship more also don’t make them to overpowered and try to give them character development so it’s not mary sue, but overall it’s a nice book just needs some work! :)