I'm planning on writing a light fiction novel sometime in the proximate future. The reason I joined this site was to post my tremendouly awful drafts and receive some criticism or helpful tips to better improve my writing. I'm only a sophmore so I'm sure I'll require some assistance at first. I still have a few details to work out before I begin to draft my novel, so in the meantime I would appreciate some comments on the pseudo-story I posted. Tell me my mistakes, strong points, weak points, or anything else you can think of. Thank you in advance.
