Bamako

I just remembered about Wattpad, I literally haven't been on here in a year because school has taken a great toll on me, but, I'm now in my last year  (I'm not going to say what grade) of middle school. Yay  But uh. My English class is 8th period it's crazy, and we were making Pre-teen books, yay  but I decided to try and finish my old book I started way back in Grade school, it's a murder mystery that I haven't finished and I was wondering if I posted my finished chapters on here, would some of y'all give me some tips? Because I don't like the way it's going  thank you. Have a great day/night and don't forget to drink. Keep well fed. And be happy ♥️