Patrick Thomas

Right now, I am in a state of writing where I'm editing more scenes in previous  chapters than I am writing new parts in the story.  For example, I am adding the well needed epic dual between Fredrick in Gable in the "Frostborne" chapter.

No one wants a book to be short and simple.
          We all have a beginning, and exist in the wonder of the middle, and never think about the end.

I am currently on Chapter 22!  So please, I swear to you all, work has been done!  Please message me if this channel is still alive!  If ANYONE receives these messages, I will continue posting.  If no sees these, Shivery, will be removed from public viewing.

I am alive

Lets have a vote.  Nearly every character in Shivery has a in-depth back story to where they originated from.  From the long list of characters, vote (or suggest if not on) who deserves their own Spin Chapter (Edwin Evarset will be excluded from this list for his story will be built through the progression of Shivery).
          1. Captain Beckons
          2. Muriel Everest
          3. Nina Deveron
          4. Sullivan Shealer
          5. Asher (the kirin)
          6. Lord Marrian the woodsman
          7.  Joan Dagenhart
          8. Alwen DeHund
          9. Robin Gableous
          10. Terreyn Padlock 
          (vote soon, get spin chapter faster).

For better understanding, The Corner Stone was written as a back story for many characters involved in Hallowsted.  It isn't a chapter on its own, more of a spin off.  The Corner Stone could be a book on its own.  It is only the beginning.  The whole reason it was introduced was to barley touch upon Hallowsted,s curse.  How exactly? Who is Iris?
          
          
          Btw, if you didn't realize, the drake Edmond is given is Gaunt.

I understand, it has been a long time.  Chapter 15 was completely rewritten from beginning to end entirely changing.  To make up for this, you'll see a fun spin off of early Hallowsted showing what this great town was.  Good news is, its almost done.  Welcome Axel Valien.

Leave a comment over the chapter, is anyone seeing these chapters tie together?

Please excuse the large gap between chapters.  It had been some time sense my last post.  I wanted to confirm the direction I was going with writing these next few chapters. Chapter 13 introduces many important characters that will affect the outcome of Shivery Winter's Woe.  This really sparks to the  beginning plot of Fredrick's story and the beginning of all this rising action.  Of course, please excuse my horrific grammar.  I still have no editor.

Chapter 11 posted and ready for all you lovely readers.  I actually suffered slight writers block!  I don't know why though, its a short simple chapter (not too short, don't worry).  Leave a comment. If you like what you read leave a vote.  Any bit helps.
          
          …Next chapter will begin William, Nina, and Spencer's adventure.