Bananahamic7

@haughtyprincess thanks for your comment. i do agree with you about Rebecca losing her spunk. I revised chapter 17 ever so slightly to give her back her personality and will continue to do so from this point on. thanks again.

Bananahamic7

HI everyone, I am so sorry that i have not uploaded forever. I am working on the rest of the story again and will upload next chapter today or tomorrow. Hope you all are still interested in my story. please read and comment. thanks so much..

Bananahamic7

@DianeHo well basically i need an editor. i need someone to go through and find my errors that i did nt see and perhaps suggest ways to make it better. if a paragraph doesnt fir right or needs to be reworded..stuff like that...
          
          and no problem on the fanning. :) glad to help and started reading your story too. it has a very good beginning.