BanditTheNickit
Apologies to bother my readers yet again. Chapter 52 is back on. It turns out this plot hole didn't require the massive fix I thought I would take. I have published a new, edited version. Team Fox Force was canceled until further notice. This is that further notice. We are BACK ON. What a relief.
I did have to publish a new version instead of revise the old, because it would've been like precision surgery to try and preserve everything that worked and revised what didn't. Sadly, my comments will be gone. If any of you feel like re-reading, it would certainly help, but don't worry too much aboit it.
If you have read chapter 52 already, then know that the flashback sequence is not changed in this new version. The changes made were in the scenes before and after. You can give it another read if you want to see the changes so you won't be confused later in the story. If you haven't read chapter 52 yet, then this shouldn't matter for you. Please carry on, and thank you all for continuing to read this incredibly long story. With a story this big, I'm bound to have an oversight once in a while.
With that said, chapter 53 can resume production. Big Wispy Wahoo!
BanditTheNickit
@BanditTheNickit Try it from the main overview of the story instead of "continue reading"
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