Bapeyou.

I don’t know if I’ve said this before but your writing is impeccable!  I hope you continue to write!! ໒( ͡ᵔ ▾ ͡ᵔ )७

Can you do a Sinners fanfic with another white oc? I was thinking Anne Hathaway but I read the Smoke fanfic and I was on a drug trip I cried like 5 times (⁠・⁠∀⁠・⁠)

Hello girly , we miss u

Would you ever do another sinners fan fiction with the vampires?

Hello, sweet lovers!
          
          I’ve noticed that there is a lot of DM’s and comments in regard to the last ending. I am truly sorry for the way it has ended, so I’ve come up with a different aspect.
          
          Would you prefer I make chapters that say (what could have been the ending)? 

Heyyy I was listening to this song Dandelion by Arianna Grade and thought it fitted some vibes of Forbidden Love!

I've been following your author's notes and it sounds like your life has gotten busy lately and it's okay to not be able to finish a story or to not have the time to write anymore, that's human, it's totally understandable but like...l don't know, you thoughtfully crafted their relationship, their escape, their marriage...just to throw in a time jump and an ending like that. And their ending felt like it erased the power of all you put into them surviving Just saying, in this political climate, already surrounded by violence, it's nice to read something hopeful - we already watched Sinners, we've all seen the tragedy, we don't need another history lesson about how Black peoples don't always make it out. I know l've overstepped but that's just my take. Amazing story tho!

Just finished reading this, beautiful story. I usually like to read all the way through and then comment (sorry for being a quiet reader) but honestly, I feel the ending was really rushed. You've seemed really committed to showing the realistic historical struggle for a biracial couple and the challenges of racism and unjustified hatred and you have done it beautifully and with maturity which is why something about the ending didn't sit right. Almost like you took the easy way out for all the character development you showed throughout the sorry. I'm a writer too (I don't post on Wattpad I just get on here to read in my free time) and l've become familiar with your layered prose and rich narrative texture, what drew me to your writing is how you seemed determined to flesh out every beat and moment of Smoke and Madison's story. it made this feel lived-in. And then all of a sudden, you introduce a major time jump and introduce their kids and have them brutally killed in the next chapter. Something about the abrupt ending doesn't match all the immersion you've done thus far. And I read your author's note, you've always been committed to showing the reality of their circumstances no matter how brutal...but again it just feels like a cheap ending framed under "realism".

I’m really glad to hear from you again love. I hope you recover well!

I hope you’re good hun.