Bapeyou

Hello, sweet lovers!
          	
          	I’ve noticed that there is a lot of DM’s and comments in regard to the last ending. I am truly sorry for the way it has ended, so I’ve come up with a different aspect.
          	
          	Would you prefer I make chapters that say (what could have been the ending)?

minonweebs

@Bapeyou Like a alternative ending? lol it would heal us of trauma crying heartbreak we experienced (I cried so hard). But do what you feel comfortable with!
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SundazedMuse

Hey! I know you said you’re working on a new book, and this made me think of something. I keep a dream journal, and one of my dreams felt so vivid that it almost played out like a movie. It gave me what I think could be a really interesting story idea.
          
          No pressure at all I just thought I’d share it in case it sparks any inspiration for you. If you end up liking it, that would be amazing, but I mainly wanted to tell you because your writing made me think of it.  By the way, I was wondering would it be okay if I gave you my Instagram handle? Since Wattpad doesn’t have private messages, I thought it might be easier if you ever wanted to chat about book ideas or anything.

SundazedMuse

I randomly had a story idea that I thought you’d enjoy, so I wanted to share it with you. No pressure at all of course… I just thought it might be fun!
            
            Imagine a story inspired by The Long Walk, but with a romance where Peter and the main character have actually known each other for years before the Walk begins. They already have history together, so instead of strangers falling in love, they’re trying to hold onto a connection that’s been there for a long time while everything around them gets more intense. I thought that dynamic could be really emotional.
            
            You don’t have to use it or anything, I just wanted to share
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Bapeyou

Hey, hun! 
            
            I don’t share my Instagram anymore, unfortunately! But I am more than welcome to hear about your idea.
            
            P.S: I might not be able to write an alternative today as I have been busy, but no worries! Eventually I will!
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missbettyyyboooo

The new story you’re making, is it a sinners one again??? I loved the one you made with smoke!

Bapeyou

Hey Miss! 
            
            No, unfortunately not. I have gotten a lot of discrimination (and praises) for the book that I have decided to let it be my last one. I will not, however, unpublish it but simply let it stay as a work of my art. 
            
            However, the book I am writing about, is a simple Ghostface book and a ‘popular-student’ girl in university.
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joijoijokopijo

Can you do a Sinners fanfic with another white oc? I was thinking Anne Hathaway but I read the Smoke fanfic and I was on a drug trip I cried like 5 times (⁠・⁠∀⁠・⁠)

joijoijokopijo

@joijoijokopijo aww that's sad I hate when people ruin it for others but you Smoke fanfic was really amazing (⁠≧⁠▽⁠≦⁠)(⁠☆⁠▽⁠☆⁠)
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Bapeyou

Hello sweet Joijo,
            I am so happy that you liked my story! However, unfortunately, I will not be making another Sinners story. I been getting pretty heavy backlash for doing a biracial relationship—story and I truly do not wish to do that again. :(
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missbettyyyboooo

Would you ever do another sinners fan fiction with the vampires?

missbettyyyboooo

@Bapeyou do exitedddd!!!
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Bapeyou

@quinzxls oh yeah, sure! I could do that one!
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missbettyyyboooo

But Id also read another book where it’s in the 30’s about stack to, either would be really cool
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Bapeyou

Hello, sweet lovers!
          
          I’ve noticed that there is a lot of DM’s and comments in regard to the last ending. I am truly sorry for the way it has ended, so I’ve come up with a different aspect.
          
          Would you prefer I make chapters that say (what could have been the ending)?

minonweebs

@Bapeyou Like a alternative ending? lol it would heal us of trauma crying heartbreak we experienced (I cried so hard). But do what you feel comfortable with!
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xohebianco

I've been following your author's notes and it sounds like your life has gotten busy lately and it's okay to not be able to finish a story or to not have the time to write anymore, that's human, it's totally understandable but like...l don't know, you thoughtfully crafted their relationship, their escape, their marriage...just to throw in a time jump and an ending like that. And their ending felt like it erased the power of all you put into them surviving Just saying, in this political climate, already surrounded by violence, it's nice to read something hopeful - we already watched Sinners, we've all seen the tragedy, we don't need another history lesson about how Black peoples don't always make it out. I know l've overstepped but that's just my take. Amazing story tho!

Bapeyou

Oh, and, I totally agree! As far as me, being middle eastern, I see hundreds and thousands of people dying in Gaza throughout the horrifying chaos. It was meant to be more realistic, but then I realized, it was probably a greater idea to just publish a book and not publish it in wattpad since this is, after all, a fan fiction community that I have gathered!
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Bapeyou

Hey Bianca, thank you so much for your input truly. I felt like I was running out of ideas in the process and knew that they wanted children! However, the ending was determined not to be the greatest outcome since we are in the middle of the 30’s. If they were to escape, it still would have led issues with their children being biracial. But I hear you! I read both of your comments and I truly value them! I wasn’t sure where to go with the story though but I knew the ending was exactly that. If I could rewrite, I really would as far as the huge jump of having children!
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xohebianco

Just finished reading this, beautiful story. I usually like to read all the way through and then comment (sorry for being a quiet reader) but honestly, I feel the ending was really rushed. You've seemed really committed to showing the realistic historical struggle for a biracial couple and the challenges of racism and unjustified hatred and you have done it beautifully and with maturity which is why something about the ending didn't sit right. Almost like you took the easy way out for all the character development you showed throughout the sorry. I'm a writer too (I don't post on Wattpad I just get on here to read in my free time) and l've become familiar with your layered prose and rich narrative texture, what drew me to your writing is how you seemed determined to flesh out every beat and moment of Smoke and Madison's story. it made this feel lived-in. And then all of a sudden, you introduce a major time jump and introduce their kids and have them brutally killed in the next chapter. Something about the abrupt ending doesn't match all the immersion you've done thus far. And I read your author's note, you've always been committed to showing the reality of their circumstances no matter how brutal...but again it just feels like a cheap ending framed under "realism".