Hello, my name is Barbara, I am 18, and I am working on a story My Boy! I am trying to improve through constructive criticism so please tell me what you think. I am trying to make it a good teen fiction. I don't know how long it will be, but I hope you like it. I also don't know how long you'll have to wait between chapters, sorry about that.
UPDATE: IT HAS BEEN OVER TWO YEARS SINCE MY LAST UPLOAD, I'M GOING TO APOLOGISE FOR THE BAD WRITING, I MIGHT REWRITE THE WHOLE THING BUT I MIGHT NOT.