OutgoingLoner_7
Hey I read a chapter of your book and it was pretty good.. Only if you make paras it will become easier to read...
I was hoping if you could give my book LOST a try too!!!
Barbeque_Space_Goo
Hey if and when you finished reading, “Of All People, You?” I began a sequel where Arllo and Logan are adults and have a kid, it’s called “Of All People, Us?” If you want to read it!
Barbeque_Space_Goo
Also I am adding paragraphs. Thank you for the helpful criticism!!! I love to improve my writing, I’m just new to this app.