Bartholomewa

Can you update the broken boy

Hey you!
          Want to do an r4r?? (Read for Read)?
          I need new books to read! I would also love it if you could read my new book!
          Thank you love!
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/260640054-the-ager

Hi. Thank you for adding Congenial to your reading list. Please do enjoy and please feel free to leave any feedback or commenting in the story / message me. Keep your eyes peeled for new updates soon! 
          

Please update

Hey, thanks for adding Heart and Soul to your reading list! I really appreciate it and I hope you enjoy it

@inipoopiki are you still righting the story

Hi., ..waiting for the next update of the story the Broken Boy

Hey I hope Alex and Michelle can be together please please please 

Well, 
          AND THAT IS THE SCENE!!! Sorry if it seems crappy. It's my first time writing something like that!
          And anyway I imagine that scene the first scene where he shows his brother that he is capable of fighting and protecting himself of course when they first met his brothers he didn't strike them as weak or pathetic but they also didn't know about him capable of doing that. Any way that's only my imagination and my thoughts getting the best of me!! But it's your book and I don't know what you had in mind for it but here it is. 
          ^that scene was for the broken boy hope you like it and excuse the foul words and any wrong grammar please

THE REST OF THE SCENE: p3 
          She looked around her frantically making sure I wasn't lying to her. "Thank you, thank you, thank you so much" she said while looking at me gratefully. "It's nothing. What are you doing out here so late anyway?!" I asked her. "Well, I was buying some things from the supermarket and I was about to go home when they suddenly appeared in front of me and asked me where my brother was and when I didn't respond he said he is going to teach me a lesson, that's when you stepped in" "so do you know them?" I asked while feeling my anger slowly return at her words. THOSE BASTARDS, I WISH I PUNCHED THEM MORE BEFORE I LET THEM OFF. "They seem to know my brother, they said something about him messing with them and they didn't like it and since he hasn't gone to school in a few days and they wanted to make me pay instead of him since he seemed he won't appear anytime soon". "Where do you live?'" I changed the subject when I noticed the sadness that laced in her tone when she mentioned her brother. "around the corner here" she answered "I am going now mum must be so worried about me-" she said and was going to continue before cutting herself off she seemed hesitated before making up her mind and saying "um-what's your name?!". "Well, you wouldn't need it, but it's Tyler by the way" she beamed at my answer, and I was really taken aback by her reaction 'why does she seem so happy for just knowing my name?' I thought in my mind "I'm Emma, nice to meet you Tyler, and thank you again. I hope we meet again soon, but now I have to go. Bye" she rambled before turning around and taking off
          'Well that was something' I thought while still smiling then something striked me, my brothers were all there they saw that well that surely is going to be interesting.
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