Sarahweee
https://www.wattpad.com/story/272393313?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=d2evelol&wp_originator=N4WVfPgmBb99zsgnxVQlKS%2BaEGhQxQ1NlJEqmMF%2B%2B7ttpJugoU1yuEMjQ9NP5dzqioGy7q0IaKuCs69IEtegP8i94cqIp8Nf%2BrHlKlIfQkOGfoVG8b%2FrvmLCNu5G6OrO Sorry,to bother you. But i wanted you to check out my first story and tell me how it is. Give me some feedback.
BasilLandry
@d2evelol Not a bother at all! I read this and I love the concept, you've done very well on the execution of the story. The characters are quite interesting! The magic kingdom idea is very cool. My only criticism would be to work on the grammar but that's hard even for me! Very good story! I like it a lot!