Bats321

Would anybody be willing to read my f-d up short stories??

Bats321

Goofy ahh stories 
          
          A shriek of pain and fear ripped through Lydia’s throat. 
          Sage attempted to shush her as the butchers knife slowly sliced through her pale, freckled, and bloody leg.
          “I wouldn’t have to do this if you hadn’t attacked me, love,” the green-eyes man sighed, brushing his knuckles against the strawberry-blondes wet cheek.
          Though his tone was apologetic, he feels no remorse for what he is doing.
          Lydia wailed even louder as Sage began hap-hazardously sawing her leg off from the mid thigh down.

Bats321

Uhugtdfhgvabhe I have this idea for a story but idk if what I wrote is any good and I need feedback anhiuvhsdgxyeu

Bats321

K that’s all I have and there’s like 6 love interests
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The Main Character-Will Wood
            “HEY!” calls out the voice, “WAKE UP!” 
            Mc's eyes shot open as they shot up from their bed. 
            “Finally you’re awake,” commented a familiar voice. 
            Of course! How could they forget? This was the voice of their childhood friend, Narcisse Fournier. 
            Mc groaned and slumped back down onto their bed, “What do you want, church boy?” whined the tired teen.
            The blond scoffed and threw the covers off of his closest friend in an attempt to elicit them out of bed.
            “OH WAIT!” exclaimed Mc, jumping out of their bed, “WE WERE GONNA HANG OUT TODAY!”
            Narcisse shook his head and left the room to let his friend prepare for the day.
            Mc looked out the window and admired the gorgeous blues, purples, oranges, and reds from the sunrise.
            Sighing, they wore a flannel, jeans, and a white tank top with Converse. 
            “Blondie! I’m ready to go to the mall,” Bellowed the androgynous teen.  
            Mc’s mother, Lucia, hugged Mc, her voluminous afro swaying as she moved. “Have fun at the mall dear,” her mother chimed softly,  her Nigerian accent prominent.  
            Both Narcisse and Mc waved to the beautiful woman in the doorway as they began their trudge to the mall.”
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