BayMart1n

Hiii, girl. What's upppp?
          
          I've read your book 'The Silhouette Man' and actually I'm impressed that you're so young yet you write so well. You write better than older people, girl. Congrats. I actually loved it, but the thing I loved was the build up of tension. I can learn a thing or two from ya, fellow writer. ;)
          
          But, of course, as any other book, it has flaws. But don't worry! I can highlight them! First of all, please fix your book cover.
          T^T
          
          'Silhouette' wasn't actually spelt right in the book cover, but you know how you'd fix it. It's left to you! 

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Ok, I'm Finally gonna post all of The Silhouette Man! Please give me your feedback-i appreciate all of y'all!!! ☺️

@AuggieGreen2004 your welcome! 

Sry guys, I forgot to mention that I am gonna delete the Speaker for now because it isn't that good, but after I finish the SH MAN I will work on it. 

Sorry I haven't been active, Google tried to delete my account for no reason LOL. Anyways, I have finally finished the draft AKA the whole book, but I won't post it until I have revised all of it, so might take a while. Not to mention I'm in school, so maybe longer than a while. TY for all of the support and reviews though!!! 

Thanks for the follow darling! 
          
          Also, you have a nice plot in your story: The Silhouette Man. I love it, but the thing is that your work looks too... (How should I put it?) cramped. The paragraphs are long and joined together, and it made it a little hard to read.
          
          Apart from that, the mystery was very nice to read. I loved it! And you write so well! 
          
          I'm a 13-year-old writer, pleased to meet you! And thanks for the follow once again! Can't wait to check out your update. 

Changes in the S.H Man:
          
          Leah's party invite is no longer included in the first 7 chapters.
          The invite will be created on different terms. 
          The town hall thingamabob is now boring to kids, so they all stay home. 

Hey, my fellow noobs, I'm gonna revise some of my stories to change the plot, just a pinch. If you don't want to go and read it all over again, which I completely understand, after I change some stuff, I'm gonna post everything I revised in a short summary.  TY!!!

Hola! I just posted the 6th chapter of the Silhouette Man and the 3rd chapter of the Speaker - please check them out and leave your honest review and opinion!!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/373004405?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=BayMart1n
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/373006815?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=BayMart1n